I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
My class is doing speeches and we are discovering and learning new techniques to use in our speech, our task was to write and say in our words how to write a good speech.
Hi Keita, I really enjoyed your speech. You talked at a great pace and used good body language. You made some really good points as well about why the techniques are useful.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Hi Keita, I really enjoyed your speech. You talked at a great pace and used good body language. You made some really good points as well about why the techniques are useful.
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